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The beating of my heart,
is pounding in my brain.
Like a hammer constantly colliding
into a brick wall.

The hard shell of my body
only amplifies the sounds all,
because I am empty.

In the midst of a lone night,
I have the same dreams.
For the images are like a movie
set on replay.

In this blurry depths on my thoughts,
these demons,these fears.
All have twitching fingers.

They touch my belly button,
and press into my skin.
And sink and stay.
They hide and bubble in my core.

The hairs on my flesh all rise,
the blood in my veins run twenty below.

And though, I may try to escape,
Though, I may scream until my lungs give out,
Though,I may run until both of my legs
are snapped into broken hard bones.

I know now, there's no way of waking up .
Wonder alone,
seeing is believing,
I'm without a soul,
knee flat on the ground. . .


There's also, a hidden poem between the lines.
can you find it ? :]
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Heroinx-x Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
this is even BETTER when yu read it the 2nd time :love:
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Student Writer
:heart: ily
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xlostandnowfound-bjx Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011
Nice <3
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
thnkyu
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:iconxneverxtherexforxmex:
wow. i like both poems. =)
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thnkyu so much :heart: :heart:
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victoriadarke Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good use of imagery. I love the emphasis on certain words.
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Student Writer
:hug:
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victoriadarke Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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eternalburns Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
Do love, so very much!

This poem is great! Keep writing, I'll be watching...
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student Writer
I will (: & thnkyuvery much sir :heart:
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13iNsAnItY13 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
are you the voice in my head?
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student Writer
I must be
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13iNsAnItY13 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
This is exactly how I feel, how I am, what happened to me. Thanks for writing this
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student Writer
you,are most welcome my dear :]
and i hope you have atleast some light in your life.
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13iNsAnItY13 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011
Thanks, you as well
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KhaledMansi Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
i love it !
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student Writer
:heart:
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Vyushur Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
Beautiful poem. The sensations are so well described and so raw, and the imagery is crystal clear even without too much description.
I love your avatar by the way. It made me laugh, so good start to the day.
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student Writer
thnkyu<3 .
I'm guessing your a fan of bmth ?
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Vyushur Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
:ahoy:
They're alright. We're more of a Korn fan.
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student Writer
Ahh, i see, I'm not much of a korn fan =P
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Vyushur Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
Well, screw you then. Nahh you're alright.
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student Writer
=P :ninjabattle:
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifully done :)
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Student Writer
why thankyou:]
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whimsicalpuppet Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
talented bitch! :) i like thiss
good job!
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Student Writer
:heart:
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manic1027 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
omg this is so beautiful i love it!!!!
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Student Writer
:hug:

thnkyou :heart:
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manic1027 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
ur welcome :hug:
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