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The beating of my heart,
is pounding in my brain.
Like a hammer constantly colliding
into a brick wall.

The hard shell of my body
only amplifies the sounds all,
because I am empty.

In the midst of a lone night,
I have the same dreams.
For the images are like a movie
set on replay.

In this blurry depths on my thoughts,
these demons,these fears.
All have twitching fingers.

They touch my belly button,
and press into my skin.
And sink and stay.
They hide and bubble in my core.

The hairs on my flesh all rise,
the blood in my veins run twenty below.

And though, I may try to escape,
Though, I may scream until my lungs give out,
Though,I may run until both of my legs
are snapped into broken hard bones.

I know now, there's no way of waking up .
Wonder alone,
seeing is believing,
I'm without a soul,
knee flat on the ground. . .


There's also, a hidden poem between the lines.
can you find it ? :]
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Heroinx-x Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011   Photographer
this is even BETTER when yu read it the 2nd time :love:
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Student Writer
:heart: ily
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xlostandnowfound-bjx Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011
Nice <3
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
thnkyu
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:iconxneverxtherexforxmex:
wow. i like both poems. =)
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thnkyu so much :heart: :heart:
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victoriadarke Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good use of imagery. I love the emphasis on certain words.
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Student Writer
:hug:
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victoriadarke Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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eternalburns Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
Do love, so very much!

This poem is great! Keep writing, I'll be watching...
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